I drew a picture for my sister, please give opinions?

Question

I drew a picture for my sister, please give opinions?
my sister will be coming home tomorrow and I rushed a picture yesterdayI will be fixing it up a little before shes here. Please give any personal views or criticisms to help me improve it, thank you!

Answer

Nice work,brbrI would watch the heavy lines and outlines, it is a natural tendancy for many to quickly trace shapes to see what we are doing as we are working, work lightly. I would go back over and lighten up some of th edges. On her cheek bone near your signature, the light seems to be from that direction so you will see less of an outline, remember places on the body like the nose, ears, forehead, the skin is more translucent because of the bone so you will tend to see more light highligts.brbrGood work!